Six Sentence Sunday: His Only Hope (3)

His Only Hope (Maison Domine II): a BDSM erotic romance coming from Samhain Publishing 9/20/2011

Hope and Gabe have just seen each other for the first time in two years after an ugly break up.

Gabe’s lips thinned and his dark brown eyes narrowed. “Shouldn’t you be, I don’t know, somewhere mysterious where no one from your prior life knows your location?”

That kind of snark had been her territory, not his. You have no clue where he’s been or what he’s done or who he is now. The idea stabbed her heart with little spikes of sadness.

“I’m back.”

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14 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday: His Only Hope (3)

  1. Nice tension! Great six!

  2. A lot of history and emotion conveyed in your six.

  3. So good Skylar. Thanks.

  4. Great six. It’s tight and tense. Excellent job.

  5. Great emotion in this six!

  6. Oooh, the tension! Well done

  7. Great six!! Makes me wonder…

  8. Getting hot…like it!

    Happy Sunday,
    Kristin Wolfgang

  9. Perfect, I felt exactly where he was coming from and her pain at the situation. Lovely. 🙂

    ~Xakara
    A Way To A Dragon’s Heart 6SS

  10. Very nice choice. Definitely shows the tension between the two.

  11. Very nice! I love the tone and voice!

  12. Great six, I love the tone too.

  13. Nice six! Great tension!

  14. There’s a lot of pain between these two. They have a long road back to
    each other. Wonder how they’ll get there. Excellent dialogue! Excellent
    Six!